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Blake has discovered the formula to turn invisible and has put his discovery to use by becoming an in. In fact he is considered the world’s greatest. After many years have ped Blake is ready to retire with his secret identity intact. Though in recent years Blake has become sloppy and shadowy figures that have lurked in the background have discovered his identity and have found a way to stop him becoming corporeal. He now risks exposure, his family and his very existence as this secret organisation have one last remaining target for the world’s greatest in…